In the first line, the quote in English has "my little one" (first-person singular). Considering the next three pronouns are in the first-person plural ("we", "our", "our") it makes more sense that that first one would be as well. "My" was probably chosen here as "Our little one" sounds slightly odd in English. In Kryptonian it doesn't, so I'm going to go with the plural form. The same applies in line 4: "I bequeath you, my son."

The last line could be translated more exactly from the English, but the given translation is most likely the original Kryptonian construct (and is the most poetic form).

In the line about bequeathing, you can see the punctuation for a parenthetical phrase.

Lines two, five, and seven contain examples of adverbial clauses.

The whole translation is in the familiar voice.